Wonderful descriptor in your poem!
nice...even micro you allow me to see it clearly...cool on the leaves meeting over the path. ha
I love the colors, so lush ~
Very cool, I can picture it.
You image is like a painting...lovely!
Nice serving up of the natural world.
You hooked me hard with /striped rockmelon leaves/ & the wonderful take on the prompt put me in mind of paintings by Renoir.
sweet little piece...you create quite a picture with such few words.
oh that is very visual...cool
It's a gardener's paradise...in living color!
pictured in words: how cleverly done.
Vivid indeed! So evocative whilst so succinct.
Ah, leaves like platters...big flat ones...can just imagine them ;)
Ah, leaves like platters....big ones...;)
Very vivid words in your micro poem!
Such powerful description in just 140 characters !
As others have said, your sensory descriptions are such that I can see and feel it.
A really lovely picture...a macrophoto in a micropoem.
Yes...so lush is your vivid description of contrasting colors.
You paint the scenery so well.. I can actually smell your words.
Graphic description--Like the leaves like platters and I can smell the pumpkin vines and see them intertwining with the rockmelons.
Ah. Great sound here. k.
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